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Review:shadowycorner says:
This is so creative and lovely. I really enjoyed this chapter. The way you describe the afterlife is amazing, because not only does it have the slightly ethereal feeling to it, it's also so...REAL! Strange things happen in this world, it's also pretty lonely and difficult, but the characters are as vivid as ever. You explain their emotions so simply and it's suddenly very easy for me to understand.

I adore the role Lily has in this story, especially in regards of her relaitonship with Sirius. I adore their friendship, honesty and the ease with which they exist together. I still can't get over the line in the previous chapter saying had it not been for James, Sirius would spend his eternity with Lily.

Adding Regulus was so wonderful. I love reading about Sirius-Regulus encounters. They are brothers, therefore the bond between them is fascinating, just as all the ache there is in the relationship due to their different paths as such. You wonderfully captured that. And now, I'm not a Snape/Lily fan at all, but when this was revealed toward the end of the chapter, I did feel this excitement. It was a nice twist.

Your descriptions are astounding. You paint the picture just enough. I loved the darkness causing the memory loss. It genuinelly scared me. I'm finding this fic to be very believable in many aspects (Sirius/Lily relationship, Regulus-Sirius talk, the afterlife and all its truths), I'll just wait for reading more about James/Sirius since they didn't exactly get to me yet. Their interaction was strained in this chapter, though, as there were other things to be dealt with. So I'm sure the next one will explain it all. I can't wait. I'm very gladd I'm reading this story. :)

~Liz

Author's Response: I'm very glad you reviewed! Thank you so much, this is a fantastic review. :)

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