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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Hello! This is Indigo Seas from the forums, here with the review you requested.

I really, really liked reading this fiction! You managed to keep good characterization, while still twisting the characters a little. That is hard to do for some authors, so I applaud you for that!

I think I've said this about every review I've left today, but your plot was very original. I don't think I've ever read a one-shot about Snape, wanting to be a Gyffindor. Well done!

I couldn't spot grammar or spelling mistakes, but I think I was too involved in your story to care. :) I really could not take my eyes off the screen while reading this. I was too busy following the story than to catch any mistakes you might have had. Really, really good job.

The way you described Slytherin at first was fantastic. The line, "Originally, Slytherin was for those who valued power, and worked to get it no matter what the odds" was amazing.

Again, a really wonderful story you have here. I'm sure many people after me will find themselves enjoying it. Thanks SO much for requesting it!

Happy Writing,
Indigo

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for being so quick! I'm glad you got so involved in my story that you might have overlooked any mistakes (though I hope I don't have any). I hope it will have the same effect on other readers!

I'm very proud of my characterization here actually, because usually I end up twisting them OOC. It was fun to play around with the Gryffindor/Slytherin perspectives. =]

Thanks for the lovely review!

~CSG


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