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Review:Tor Petty says:
My gosh, I LOVE this story so far. Such detail, and you don't portray Lily perfect OR too fiery. She's a real person in this story, with real flaws. Not just a random cliche concocted in the depths of fanfiction.

I like how you began this after the Snape's Worst Memory incident, and you didn't even need to tell us right off that that's where we were at - we just knew from your description. Marvelous.

Analogies = Amazing. Especially the dementor one.

UGH! WHAT WONDERFUL DIALOG! I'M INSANELY IMPRESSED!

Fruit she couldn't taste... You know, I'm usually not one for Sirius/Lily, but you make it sound so natural - as if she couldn't help it. And, if I was ever around Sirius Black, I don't think I could be able to help it, either. Nice work.

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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