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Review:Elf_ears13 says:
I love the ambiguity that this piece creates! At first I was a little skeptical, since so many authors try to build suspense by hiding the identity of a character, but I'd seen your summary so I was just a little put off. But as I got into it I really saw that through leaving out too many names and too many specifics, you really got to the heart of the emotions, and it really applies to anyone. I like that you took a few liberties with her character - like not being able to cook - because I think too many authors try to stick too much to canon, but that hampers development of characters.

The length was just right. I like the rising and falling of the sentence complexity and paragraph length - it read right as his emotions and his frustration grew and then fell to the simple, resounding last line. Wonderful.

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