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Review:Harry_Potter_Mom says:
What an interesting look into Snape's home life! I still feel sorry for everything he lost all those years before... You are doing a good job of progressing the relationship realistically. You've also obviously gone to a lot of trouble (and study) to theorize her mode of transportation to get to Snapes!

The house elf was a nice touch! ;)

Oh, one more spot that stood out:
"Severus smiled. "I've very glad you did..."
Should that be, "I'm very glad you did..."

Everything else looks good! :D Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm really trying to keep this relationship realistic. Its kind of hard for a lot of people to picture, so you have to work extra hard to make it work.

Snarky really does seem to fit. Severus seems like the type of person who needs someone to look after him, even if he would never admit it!

Ooh, thanks for finding that! I'll try to fix it at some point-I'm not at my home computer since my internet is down. :-(

I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far!

Thanks so much for the review!!!


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