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Review:Harry_Potter_Mom says:
Wow... there was a lot that went on in this chapter! Poor, poor Ron - I just want to cuddle him. What will he do when he finds out who Hermione is with? Oh, my!!

Harry and Ginny are cute together! :) She's not as edgy as I would have expected, but since the story is about Hermione and Snape - it works!

Another spot stuck out...
"With a flick of her want, the mess was gone."
Did you mean "With a flick of her wand..."?

On to the next chapter! :D Good Job!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wouldn't want to be in the room when Ron finds out!

Hmm, I can see your point about Ginny. I guess I see her as being a little softer, but not too much, of course, or she wouldn't be Ginny!

Oh, thank you for pointing out my typos! (I meant to say something in the last review, but i must have forgotten. This goes for that one too.) I try to make sure the chapters are alright, but there's always that line or two I miss.

Thanks so much for the review!!!


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