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Review:Harry_Potter_Mom says:
Hello again! :)

This was another lovely chapter... it drew a lot of emotion out and I actually laughed out loud in a couple of spots (when Snape was talking about what he would do to Ron). Very nice!

I like the fact, again, that this isn't rushed - meaning you didn't jump to them planning their wedding the day after she saved his life! :D I like the turmoil - it's realistic.

One little thing jumped out at me (nothing major)...
"A part of her wanted the draw her wand...
Perhaps that should be "A part of her wanted TO draw her wand..."

That's it! :) Good job... on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi again!

Yeah! I made you laugh! If I've succeeded at that, then I know I've done my job well. :-)

I'm really trying hard to keep this as realistic as I can. I mean, I can't have Severus suddenly wear pink robes for fun! I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job so far at staying on track.

Thanks a bunch!!! I really appreciate your feedback!!!


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