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Review:Leo072491 says:
Ok now I'll be honest. I really at first did not think I would like this story. I am happy to say I was proven wrong :) As someone else said your spelling and grammar were perfection which is something I will never be able to say :P I think you made a very well written, interesting beginning. It did a very nice job expressing the main character, Albus, and his status, as well as showing off some of the other main characters you have.

I don't think this was boring at all, simply elongated. However that does not automatically mean something bad. It simply means that there was a lot of explanation. However since this is just the first chapter that is to be expected. Just keep an eye on it for further chapters :)

I love the little sample you gave. It totally grabbed my attention and I have favorited this story so I'll know as soon as you update. I can't wait to read more and you did a fabulous job!

~Leo

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story after all ^_^. There were plenty of stories I thought I wouldn't like that I eventually ended up loving here on HPFF, so yeah. When it comes to spelling and grammar, aside from Word's auto corrector, I also proofread. A lot. I'm picky, especially when it comes to first chapters.
Even though I'm re-writing this (a lot of people pointed out some things they didn't like here, and I saw they needed re-writing), the plot of the chapter will be pretty much the same. I'm glad you didn't think it was boring, I really struggled to make it as interesting as it could be, giving the lack of action and all. The explanations are crucial to the story, because it's the premise from which the story starts off.
Chapter 2 will be more exciting, hopefully. I'm really really happy you enjoyed the chapter, and I hope you'll enjoy the next ones even more.
Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it enormously. ^_^

Hugs,
CJ

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