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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Your beast is a very pretty one, Missy. :P It's been so long since I've read something by you (my bad) and reading this was like reading liquid words - everything flowed together and moved along so beautifully. Everything here is in the afterlife, but it's still so real, the emotions so powerful. The setting adds an interesting degree of mystery, making one ask what sort of place it really is and how it works. I love the addition of the memory-consuming darkness - it adds an aspect of horror to this story of redemption and reunions (which would, by itself, probably be too fluffy :P).

It's funny because some of this story can be read as an implicit Sirius/Lily. *evil grin* Or maybe it's just my corrupted brain reading it that way. The friendship between them - or is it more of a comradeship? - seems so deep here, and they're so comfortable with each other. The passion that Sirius experiences with James isn't the same sort of relationship (which could be, at the moment, due to James's stubbornness). Whatever is going on with the pairings, this is a gorgeous piece of writing. You have a mastery of language that few others can claim to possess. ^_^

Author's Response: Haha, thank you, Susan. :)

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