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Review:amieharry_ginny says:
When i read this the first time the one word that came into my mind was ... odd!! Sorry i don't mean to offend you but that's what i felt this was really odd when compared to other D/G stories i've read and i really didn't know if this was D/G more like a H/G because of this line "Your mother is worried" ... I mean i don't exactly see Draco Malfoy worried about Ginny Weasley's mother which is why i said it was ... odd

Other than that i found the story sad and deep. Though its a bit confusing and bit like a riddle it somehow makes you go "aww" from sadness. I loved how perfect this chapter's emotion was and i absolutely loved the way you expressed Ginny's emotions, her sadness and her anger from those little lines.

Though the story was sad and emotional there was the word "baldy" that made me laugh once ... i dunno why but i just cant see why she would first of all call him that and then say she kinda "loved him" ... which is why i used the word odd

Though the story was odd i kinda enjoyed it, you have a great talent of being able to capture the characters emotions perfectly and with a little tweaking you could do great!!! Well Done and i would rate this story as 10/10 because its gorgeously written!!!

~Amie

Author's Response: Hey:]

Okay, the first thing you said: Im sorry, but I certainly disagree, he is calling because her mother has asked him to call her; hes not worried about her mother, but shes retorting to him because she sees no other way, this is another way of trying to reach her daughter; by using the only person she knows her daughter still cares about. It has nothing to do with him caring about her mother. He still cares about 'Ginny', not in the way he used to, he doesnt love her, but he cares for her well-being and that is enough to make him call her and try and talk to her even though hes pretty sure it wont help.

The word baldy... :P
Well, right then shes very very cynical and cruel, shes superior to him and she sees everything in black. But even though hes a baldy and totally out of her league, she cant help but think hes nice. You see? her feelings are very messed up and shes very confused. But she realises, even in the beginning, that she likes him in some weird way.

She realises she loves him, kinda, because its not like it was with 'Draco', hes different, but he makes her become someone she likes, he helped her break free.

The story is meant to be odd, weird and one of a kind. I was going for the 'im not sure i quite understood'/'huh'-effect.

Thank you so much for your compliments on my writing:] It really means a lot.

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