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Review:Marauders001 says:
Hello there!

My true honest opinion about this fanfic is- AWESOME!
I absolutely love it. It's smart, funny and completely in-character.

The actual idea and the way you set out the story is very clever. Having the four different houses and their thoughts made me think and i could imagine them sitting there talking to one another about girls. Every one of those viewing points had at least two things that made me laugh!

One of the main things i love about this is that you've kept it nice and simple. It's the perfect size for a one shot, not too big, not too small-just right (I feel like I'm reading Goldilocks and the three bears again)

Your description isn't too fancy-don't worry i won't do the whole 'just right' thing again. Its sweet simple and easy to read.

Your paragraph and sentence structure is great. You don't have any paragraph long sentences and the paragraphs themselves are perfect.

Your story is very funny, ideas such as Neville teaching Harry to dance, the way you portrayed Crabbe and Professor Trelawny coming up to ask '...Have any of you spotted the Grim at all lately' had me in fits of laughter.

Keep up with the great work. This is a work of art, be proud! Funny and Creative, i wouldn't be surprised if you are working as a comedian or author, or plan to become one! 10/10!!!

Can't wait to read more of your work, its fabulous!
My best Wishes,
M001-I.E-Iman (either one)

Author's Response: Awk, I'm so chuffed with this review!
It's just right, I feel that now is the right time to reveal that I am in fact Goldilocks =P Lol
I'm only an author in my dreams!
Thank you so much for taking the time to review. =]


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