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Review:ChoS_sista_gurl says:
AH the ending was so abrupt! I want to know MORE!

The idea was good. I loved the witty banter between Ginny and Lucius...it seems like they would be the type to run circles around each other. It was interesting to see another take on Ginny and Harry's relationship.

My only problem was that the entire chapter was building up and building up suspense, as in...what's going to happen next?!?! Until Lucius just Apparates away, which is a bit of a let-down. But still, that is less of a problem than an indication of how good your suspense-skills are. =] I would add some closure at the end, maybe Ginny's thoughts on the whole thing.

~CSG

Author's Response: I'm going to go back and re look at the ending. As soon as I think of something, I will change it and add it to the archive.

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