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Review:Joanne K says:
I just had to read this fic, seeing as though I am pregnant myself. In fact I have just got back from a visit to the obstetrician lol.

I really loved this one-shot, it reminded me so much of taking my own son to the doctor's with me, so you really characterised the three boys quite well, I couldn't imagine trying to take three of my son to the doctor's with me, I felt so sorry for poor Molly!

My favourite line would have to be Bill's question at the end, "Can we keep both of them, Mummy?" Healer Whitlock wasn't the only one laughing, it was just so cute and the typical innocent question that a child would ask.

On the technical side I couldn't fault you at all on your spelling and grammar. And it really was such an endearing piece that I can relate too so well at the moment that I just can't help giving it a 10/10.

Author's Response: It's funny, I wasn't sure that line was going to come out right, but it seems to have worked. I worry sometimes that things sound better in my head than they really do ;)

I reacted quite like Molly to finding out I was having twins - I was sure my OB was just joking with me, but then he put them up on screen with their little heads together (then one of them flipped and they started kicking each other in the head - I should have known what I was in for). It's really bizarre to think of having two babies in there, and so uncomfortable at the end. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thank you for reviewing!

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