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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
This is such a hilarious story! Although short (and shorter than I'd usually go for) you bring together a lot of great elements, making this a fun quick read. :D The characters are very much in character - silly boys who love jokes way too much, haha. The Sirily joke really made me laugh, probably because I've written on the ship as you know, but still, it was the perfect way to root this story more firmly in canon - it's totally a ship that would never happen, especially after what happened in DH.

Rambling on... I really felt sorry for Remus in this - he acted a lot like he did in the Penseive scene in OotP: awkward, uncertain as to how he could control his friends (if at all), slightly acknowledging that he can't do anything about their insanity. He's probably scared for life by the end, seeing Sirius in a skirt! :P

This is a great way of continuing on with JKR's prologue, keeping up with the lightheartedness of James and Sirius as they roam about on a flying motorbike. It's amazing how the two of them can manage such lightheartedness in the midst of a war, but it does suit their personalities.

So yes, this is a great story and I've enjoyed re-reading it very much. ^_^ It's great to come across something that's just so fun to read!

Author's Response: Squee! Thank you! It was short, but it was my first piece of writing for around a year, so I didn't want to push it too far, but I'm really tempted to write another happy Maruder one-shot and possibly a short story - they 're so much fun to write. ^_^

Sirily's are fun to read (is writing one myself) and I thought a slide in of so called canon relationship would be fun to add in, so I'm glad you liked it (and noticed it!)

Hehe, Remus has nightmares after is, I would think, lol.

I think the two of them - especially James and Sirius - would of joked and messed around the entire way through, so I'm glad they humour amongst the war was believable.

Thank you, Susan! It means a lot! ^__^

Thank you for your review! ^_^


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