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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Oh, this was such a beautiful one-shot!! I absolutely adored the first part, the one with the dream of little Remus being bitten. It was so beautifully written and delicately described. You portrayed a very vivid picture I could see in so much detail in my mind's eye.

Also, you've described Remus and Tonks' emotions very vividly and it got me completely caught up in this story. I trust Remus' refusal throughout HBP (maybe even before, for all we know) was extremely hard on her and at some point it would lead to her breaking completely, not able to keep it all inside anymore. You described that moment very well.

The transitions you made from Tonks' point of view to Remus' and back came very naturally and they made the story flow nicely.

I'm a sucker for everything Remus/Tonks, but this was especially enjoyable to read. The angst made it even more believable and the happy ending even more welcoming. I liked this story very, very much. :)

Amazing job!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! This was one of the very first 'serious' fics I ever wrote, so your feedback means even more to me to read. Thank you again, much appreciated!

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