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Review:Pegasus1979 says:
Hi there,
This has the makings of a very good little one-shot. The story is good and your characterisations are wonderful.

However, it is filled - and I mean seriously filled - with grammatical errors and problems. I started to list them in this review, but to be honest I was starting to feel horrible that I was ripping it to shreads and didn't want to do that. Instead, I make this offer. I know you have said in your A/N that you have a beta, but if you want me to go over this story for you, I am more than happy to do so. Feel free to come and find me on the forums (my name is Pegasus1979 there too), send me a message and I will highlight your numerous mistakes.
Maybe once they are corrected this will then be a really good story!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

I know, I've been busy with school so I hadn't had time to sort of a beta, but thank you for your offer, I will certainly take you up on it!

Thank you for your review! :)

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