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Review:smile2006 says:
My old review wasn't upto standard for this wonderful fic - so I is glad for another chance. :P Also, where's your Dramione? *cries*

Anywho, beautifully written, Susan! I love the hesitancy between Lily and Sirius, and the fact that Sirius just isn't able to remember aswell as Lily saying she has changed which I think shows that a Sirily relationship just would never have worked.

Peraps a smidge too long (but I'm one too talk, to be honest.) But the way Sirius was portrayed as confused and couldn't remember, was cleverly reflected in your writing, broken some how but still making sense to me as a reader. :)

The memory flashbacks to the sirily relationship was a nice touch. It was a nice way to know that the relationship was different to how Lily would of been with James.

It was wonderfully written, Susan. ^___^

Author's Response: It's so funny because I actually shortened this story after your previous review of it, though I do agree that it is a bit dragged out. The problem is that I don't know what else to cut. There are details that are important to the story that I don't want to leave out. maybe I should go back to the style I did for "ad memoriam" with the bleak, anti-descriptive narration. :/

*thinks*

Anyways! Thank you so very much for reviewing this again, Em. It means a lot to me. ^_^ It's great that the flashbacks and the characterizations worked out for you - they seemed iffy when I was writing them.


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