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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Hi! This is Indigo from the forums, here with the review you requested.

Wow, just... wow. That was absolutely brilliant. It's very exciting for me to read a pairing I haven't read yet, and this was a very big treat for me. It's great to see the characters react so uniquely, because, if the pairing was, say, Ron and Hermione, you'd know exactly how they'd react. This, however, was the opposite. I really enjoyed reading it!

There were only a few mistakes that I could catch, which all had to do with simple typos. Nothing to worry about, though. If you really are concerned about it, you should just re-read it, as I'm sure you will find them as well.

Reading through Rodolphus' point of view was really, really great. The way you chose your words was fantastic, and the dialog and all other writing flowed brilliantly. Well done!

Overall, I would say this story deserves a 10/10. It was really, really great.
Happy Writing,
Indigo

Author's Response: I'm so thrilled that you think it's brilliant!! I've never written a Bellatrix/Rodolphus story before and writing them all fluffy is kind of odd too but I think it came out pretty ok.

I really did enjoy writing Rodolphus, I think he was awesome, especially when he made Bellatrix blush :D (I exceptionally enjoyed writing that part). But yes, Bella and Rod's actions were kind of unexpected, with Ron, he'd say something stupid and Hermione would roll her eyes.

I will check on those typos so thanks for telling me.

Thanks so much for your awesome review, Indigo:D!!

Lia


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