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Review:Beyond the Veil says:
Still really good! Like I said before, I'm just liking everything more and more. The reactions are good and you place explanations about Irene so well, and they're not overdone either. I'm completely hooked now. You've grabbed me for good, I think ;)

Again, though, I'm noticing more tense issues. You switch around quite a bit, and although I know that can happen when you get distracted or stop for a few minutes, etc., but you do need to watch out for those. It can feel awkward sometimes.

Overall though, I'm impressed yet again :)

Blaire

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This chapter was quite nerve-racking as this was the first time we really see a dragon up-close and I didn't want to mess it up, so I'm thrilled to know you enjoy it. =D I really should be more careful with the tenses, shouldn't I? Thank you for pointing them out again, I definitely am going to fix those. ^_^

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