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Review:NevillesSoulmate says:
This is definitely an interesting idea, especially the Dudley/Lavender ship. It was a rather short chapter for such an important meeting, though. I'm not one to talk since I have a hard time writing longer things, but there was so much information and shocking revelations, like Lavender losing her legs, in such a short time. I think you could definitely add to emotions/reactions, but you have a completely original plot going that I think will work really well. I'm assuming you're going to do flashbacks, right? It would be very interesting to see how all of this came about, and I like the fact that you didn't start at the beginning-beginning. Overall, good start. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review. Yes, I intend to fill in via flashbacks. It was meant as a short intro chapter, but I'm going to combine chap 1 and 2 into the first chapter to make it make more sense.

Thank you for confirming that it's an original plot. I definitely wanted something I hadn't seen before.

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