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Review:bron says:
oh dear
teddy is going to chuck a spaz isnt he?
aww sev is so cute
at least teddy talked to sev.
oh jane and teddy are just so cute
i love that it was teddy who introduced him to the good wizarding world not tonks or sev
this chapter flowed heaps better and i think your block is almost gone!
looking forward to the next chapter, but take your time. you took longer with this chapter and its obviously made a good difference.

Author's Response: Yeah... one step forward and two steps back...

I don't think Teddy and Jane will be a problem... It's like impossible for someone not to like Jane. And OMG I have an idea for a story about Jane... it's sord of related to the book... The Chrysalids by John Whyndam. (and this is a clue because it will tell you a lot about Jane) In the story she have a close relationship with a guy, who's family think he's deviant (you know they're muggles and he's not and they treat him bad). This story shouldn't be long so I hope I'll be able to write it.

I'm glad the flow is getting better because I'll need it write that story... and I have another one that's already started that I have to write...ghhh to much ideas..

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