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Review:Weasleys Forever says:
Very good chapter, very well written. There is a real dreaminess about this chapter which I love. He seems disconnected from what is going on. His mind may be racing at 90 miles an hour, but the peace of Hermione's drugged sleep slows him down. I love your line, "the contrast between her peacefulness and the state of mind he was in struck him. "

Keep writing.

Author's Response: He feels disconnected because it's somehow far away from what he usually experiences.
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