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Review:Ollie Vander says:
Hmm, actually, I don't think Dudley is a failure at anything. His problem, as Harry told Ron, is nerves. If he doesn't think he can do it, he can't. He told himself he could fly, and so he did. It will be interesting to see how this works out later on.

There's not much more to say...the story is becoming a little boring with just day by day, but I sence it will pick up soon.

Please get the next chapter up ASAP, I can't wait.

Author's Response: Sorry that the story feels "boring" to you. I've been trying to convey Dudley's difficulties and his progress towards figuring out what he must do to make it in his new environment. Everything I write in a story has some purpose, so try to hang in there. I'm afraid if you're looking for action/adventure this is probably not the story for you.

While Dudley can probably do most things he sets his mind to, he can't be good at everything. He is a failure at a lot of things at the moment... he fails to see how he must change, and he often fails to meet the standards set for him. This will change in time of course, but there are a lot of things Dudley must do before he figures that out.

Thanks for your reviews!

-JW.


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