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Review:Browneyes101 says:
Here I am again. :)

This was a good way to start with a chapter this deep into the story. You need to keep your reader interested and you've done just that, which I would like to complement you on. This chapter had a lot of...sass is the word I would use to express what I found in this chapter. This chapter was very well thought out and written beautifully, the only thing that I have a problem with is the flow of the events.

Bad news. The flow mostly is something that I saw that stunk out at me, and I don't mean to sound ride but this is the only problem in this chapter, and since that is it sticks out like a sore thumb. That mostly is the only thing that I see.

Hope I helped.8/10


Author's Response: Thanks :) I do have a hard time making the story flow, but I'm doing this to help with that.

Thanks again, it was helpful!

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