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Review:C D johnson says:
HI Lils,

I am really sorry that I haven't read this till now, its just that school work has really taken over! (1 more exam left and i'm back writing)

On to the review.

Well i thought the concluding chapter was fantastically writen. I have mentioned it before and I'll mention it again...your writing style is wonderful it seems to bring the story to life!

The characterisation of all the characters especailly James and Lily were 100% perfect, I really think you've mastered the characterisation technique!

I knew that James and Lily would end up being boyfriend and girlfriend, how could they not! They are really suited to each other.

Lily, this has been a wonderful one short! I think it's superb! I'm giving you a 10/10 because you never cease to amaze me with your superb stories!

Yours Magically,
Craig

Author's Response: Hey!

Don't worry about it, I know what the hurdle of school is like to writers like us believe me! Lucky you, my finals START next week meaning probably a lot less writing till the holidays! how on earth did you set your quill down, I'm having a terribly hard time letting go and am getting in trouble with my Mum daily because I'm "not committed enough"!

Hugs,
Lily


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