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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Absolutely wonderful! This chapter had that perfect combination of romance, humor and angst. The ball scenes were so well detailed and the kiss... Oh, it was exactly as I've pictured it would happen. To tell you the truth, I'm a hopeless romantic, though I usually gravitate to angst in writing, so I don't even have to tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. The romance was laced with your (actually, Kerri's) characteristic sarcasm --- the way she criticized the typical "girlish" way the other girls were acting, but subconsciously trying to fight off the urge to act that way herself.
Very, VERY good!

The way she exaggerated the entire thing --- speaking of some "ultimate humiliation" as a way of coping with her emotions and the way she finally admitted to herself - and to Tonks - that she actually is in love with Remus. Very touching and well developed. I'm usually not the person to look for something to criticize in a story, only mention if I really noticed something "off", but even if I wanted to, I don't think I would have been able to find a flaw in your story. It is so well thought of and written out --- it's obvious you spent a lot of time planning everything.

I'm really curious on how you're going to develop their relationship further. I'm sure some time of awkwardness and mutual denial will follow... ^_^

By the way, I liked the "scene" with the sorority girl at the ball... It was witty and funny, I like Southern accents (I'm an X-men fan... ;D) and I'm pretty much fascinated with all kind of accents in general...

I'm looking forward to the next update!


Author's Response: You guys are all so encouraging that I'm thinking of going back to the original fiction project that I scrapped. You're starting to make me think that I might actually have some talent in me.

You're right that Kerri and Remus will have some tension in their friendship after this. They'll spend a couple of months trying to forget the whole thing but go back together eventually. Actually...I found a use for Gilderoy Lockhart who will be returning soon...I'm going to use him to help me push Kerri and Remus back together.

Yes, Kerri does tend to exaggerate things and throw them out of proportion. So does Remus. They both think that they have issues in their lives that make them not worth being loved and yet admire the merits they see in one another. That's why I think they're so good for each other.

Thanks for all your reviews. They've all been so encouraging and helpful.

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