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Review:Bella_Portia says:
Well, I know this is supposed to be a dark story, but this particular scene is too funny. The mixed up dinner is pretty humerous (might have been even funnier if they never straightened out the misunderstanding until the guests arrived.)

Did Ginny not have any emotional reaction to Harry's cousin? His Aunt and Uncle were horrible to him, after all.

I thought the scene at home was really charming. Also, I' glad I didn't read it on a full stomach (all that talk about hummus and tapenade).

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I take it you don't like hummus or olive tapenade? LOL. I wanted to keep a Middle Eastern theme to the food to go along with the lamb stew.

I wanted to go the route of having the mix-up continue until guests started arriving, but I was having a hard time justifying that they wouldn't discuss what they thought about the fiances, so I didn't feel that it worked right when I went that route.

Thank you again for pointing out how I didn't show emotion properly. I'm working on a short story now for something else that I'm doing just to work on emotional depth to characters.

I promise there will be some dark elements to this story, but it will be a little while, I have some backstory to set up first.


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