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Review:Karamaa says:
Wow, intersting story.
One thing you want to watch, though, is when two people are talking, like Harry and Hermione for instance, is that you don't overuse their names too much. If that makes any sense.
I also found it slightly intriguing that harry had a blackberry.


Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I have answered about the technology a lot in other responses, so I won't go into it here. I'm glad that you thought it was interesting. Thanks for the suggestions on dialogue. I have learned a lot since writing this story about writing and will re-write it at some point, and I will probably look closely at the dialogue at that point.

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