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Review:inkismyworld says:
I love this pairing! I liked that you branched away from typical maurder pairings- but I wish it was longer, and maybe more detailed? A way you could lengthen it is not reveal everying at one shot:

"The vial was opened and poured over Lily’s locket, as an everlasting symbol of his love for her."

You could maybe imply that he had a deep unending love for her?

Also I couldn't really picture Sirius coming back and being civil towards his brother- it seemed like he would have a " you betrayed everyone now I disown you" type of thing going.

But again I loved how you took risks with this unconvential pairing and added that he had an artisitc flair, I could picture him having one too :)

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