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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Ah, Kiss Me... I love that song... ;p

And I absolutely adored this chapter!!! Kissing in the rain --- probably the most romantic thing ever... I really needed a dose of romance today, thank you for that...
And it is so like Luna to smile while running in the rain. I can totally imagine her doing that. And I knew that the earring will play a part eventually... ;)

Rolf is a very mysterious and complex person --- I like that you have made him that way.
"if Luna had told him that he had them stuck in his pockets, he would have believed her without even bothering to check if his trousers had been infected by a battling herd of the witty creatures that she so often spoke about." --- haha, I must once again say how much I like the way you have with words. Luna can sure have such effect on a man without even realizing it herself... lol

A side note: in your response to my last review you mentioned you're not a native English speaker. I would have never guess!! Your English seems impeccable! Granted, English is not my first language either, but still...

A beautiful chapter. Well done!

Author's Response: I love that song too! It's great!

Yes, I'd love to kiss someone in the rain. It's very much romantic, I have to agree. I'm glad you liked this chapter and that it was a good doze of romance for the day:D

Yes, he's quite a complex character I must say and Luna notices that too. That complexity and the contrasts in his character really draw her closer to him every time they meet. Luna will always be oblivious to the effect she has on people and particularly on Rolf:D

Indeed, I'm not a native speaker but this chapter was beta'ed by the wonderful xXLuna_LovegoodXx who is Scottish so she really did a good at fixing my grammar errors.

Thank you so much!


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