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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Hello again...

I very much liked the letter from Kerri to Snape. It is true that he has much more potential than he is showing. I always kind of thought Severus had skill close even to Dumbledore's --- an expert duelist, an advanced Occlumens, a potions master and with his wit and intelligence that had kept him alive for so long...
And it just dawned on me --- when Kerri comes to teach in your third novel, will that be a step away from canon (since I presume she will teach Care for Magical Creatures which was Hagrid's job in the actual book), or are you planning something else, a combination of the two, perhaps?

Haha, Streak is awesome!! He's probably my favorite out of the group. And the Scooby Doo reference was cool... I just saw an episode on Cartoon Network last night and the thing with doors was in it... ;P Your sense of humor is brilliant! And the entire Dementor sequence was very well written --- I enjoyed the dynamics very much. You have a sense for details (for example, the description of Kerri's patronus), I like that very much.
You really thought of everything --- the room where the werewolves were locked during full moon. A brilliant idea --- terrifying, but brilliant to show the background of the people on a margin of society.

Another thing I have to compliment you on is your characterization. It's very believable and that is hard to achieve while writing in the first person. It is subjective, in a way, but very good developed and written.

:O You are EVIL!!! The preview for the next chapter --- FINALLY!!!

[sorry, I have some difficulties expressing what I want to say in the past couple of days...]

Author's Response: I agree. I think Snape was exceptionally gifted and intelligent. He was very badly under appreciated and underestimated. Even Voldemort was clueless when it came to Snape.

Right now, Kerri fully intends to teach all of the students when she goes to Hogwarts. Hagrid's name being cleared and Dumbledore letting him teach will change that. Hagrid will get the Gryffindors and Slytherins and Kerri will get the Ravenclaws and Hufflepuffs. That will limit her interaction with some of the main characters like Harry and co. but give me the freedom to develop some of the lesser ones and invent new ones. I'm really looking forward to playing with Luna. I think Kerri will really like her.

As for the dementor scene, I love it when reviewers all complement me on the same things. That tells me that I really have done a good job. It seems like Streak is popular with most of my readers, (he's my favorite too) and that my description of Kerri's patronus was well done. (Bella Portia even quoted a line that she especially liked). You guys are really spoiling me rotten with all the flattery.

Thank you so much.


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