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Review:kittyscouldron says:
Well, I liked that. I'm a huge Blaise fan lately. A little piece of advice. When the sentence "...I had got when Harry asked me to be, gulp, his girlfriend..." you might one to consider replacing it with "...I had gotten when harry asked be to be - I would gulp at the thought - his girlfriend..."
That's all. I liked it. I like flashbacks. Short and simple and holds a sense of suspense. I saw your story on your page where you posted a request and saw it was B/H so, I had to come and read it. 8 of 10

Author's Response: thanks very much! i like to get this kind of feedback, especially as a new B/H writer! *huggles*

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