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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
eh, honestly i'm not too excited to have ana back. i definetely enjoyed just have harry chill in the marauder era. but, it's totally not my story, and i still enjoy reading it, so it doesn't matter too much.

your writing is getting much better; better flow, less typos. the only thing i wanted to point out was the A/N in the middle of the chapter was a bit distracting. but that's it.

okay, so i was thinking about your summary problem, and i think that i've come up with something that'll suit you:

If Harry thought defeating Voldemort was difficult, he was in for a suprise. The savior of the Wizarding world obviously never tried to travel back in time to get his parents together while being mute, hated by James Potter, and followed by his crazy twin sister. Follow Harry and Ana as they attempt to get their parents together, or risk not being born.

maybe something like that? nice chapter, looking forward to more!

oh, and it would be in the 70s not the 80s.

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