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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
ahaha. i totally shouldn't be laughing at Harry, cause this sucks for him, but i am. man, i defintely wouldn't want james potter mad at me.

you're getting a lot better at pacing your chapters at this point, which make them much more enjoyable to read. however, you still might want to think about drawing scenes out a little more, and even though this 3rd person point of view isn't omniscient, you might want to at least include the outward responses of the marauders.

"you're a a really good teacher." and winner of the corny line award goes to -lily evans!

good chapter, they just continue to improve!

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