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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
not bad. i like the story idea, just a few things i wanted to point out.

there are a few typos, not so many that it gets annoying to read, though. i don't know if you've ever read a story like that? it's pretty bad. but don't worry, this wasn't like that. (okay, rambling now.)

also, the chapter was paced a little quickly, and slightly jumpy. if you took a little more time to extend the scenes, it would flow a lot better.

harry's twin is a big cliche, and a little mary-sue as well. you might want to consider adding an AU warning because of the twin, and also try to balance Ana out with some not-so-great traits.

in all, not a bad start for your first fic, i look forward to reading more!

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