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Review:Strawcherry says:
Ooh, this was really good! I think your writing in this piece was very strong -the descriptions of things made me live the whole thing and the emotions were pulsing through the lines, especially in the flashback scene. I loved the interactions between Hermione and Sirius, very fiery and passionate! The contrast between them -Sirius as the 'emotional' one who's made piece with his feelings and is trying to make some progress and Hermione as the rational one who tries to deny her feelings until it becomes almost too frustrating -is nicely drawn.
I would have liked to see more of the details of the final battle or of Sirius' death, but I also have to admit that maybe the story works better without these, because now Hermione's feelings are really the center of the story and all that matters, which makes them all the more powerful. Again, well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. It's really great to see that you understood what I was trying to achieve with the story. Again, thank you for the review

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