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Review:Bella_Portia says:
I enjoyed the story. It was a bit predictable, but I don't think that diminished the pleasure of reading it. The Romeo and Juliet story (in HP, it's usually the Pure blood and the Mudblood) often anticipates a tragic ending; it's all a matter of how you get there.

In this case, I thought you presented Scorpius' POV very well and interestingly enough that I wanted to keep reading to find out what ol' weird Draco was gonna do. And, I must say, the way you pulled off the ending did come as a surprise to me. I didn't expect him to get plastered, stagger into the candy store, and suddenly A/K poor Rose. (As a person who works in the criminal justice system, I will tell you there was something weirdly believeably about that last scene. Alcohol can be a terrible precipitator of violence. Please accept this as a very wordy complement.)

In gryffindorseeker's story, "We Gryffies", there is a reference to a profession called "psychological healer." I hope Scorpius is able to see a professional of this nature and get some help, because he is clearly carrying far too much guilt. Rose would want him to put it behind him, because she's allowed him to prove to himself that he's not a bad kid after all.

Enjoyable, believable and touching story.

Author's Response: wow thank you! i hope it wasnt too predictable... i try to avoid the cliche! you work in the criminal side of things? how fascinating! im glad you could appreciate my view of things. im sure scorpius will cope... after all, its what rose would have wanted. thanks for reviewing!

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