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Review:rosai_gryffindor says:
*sigh* your writing really does get better and better!! :D this was a brilliant one-shot! and you wrote it wonderfully! ah the woes of lily and james... they can get so annoying! but am i fed up of reading about them? nope! hehe!

i dont know how to make this review long... there reallyisnt much left for me to say, as everything i said in the last two reviews also fit here in this chapter, as the characterisation, feelings, tension, and descriptions were all marvelous! and it had its chuckles too, like when sirius picked up lily and carried her to the hospital wing! lol! and madam pomfreys indignation yet obviously utter pleasure at lily and james kissing! poor her, having to put up with pupils crying at the expense of others, and then having to console them and witness their troubles! yet something really does tell me she likes it! good old poppy!

anyways, this has been a great tale of the most famous couple in the hp world, and you have carried it through beautifully! i could really imagine it happening. you should indeed be proud of the outcome!

and oh look, ive managed to make this longish after all! dont you just love me for it? hehe!

never stop writing!!!

Rose :)

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