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Review:rosai_gryffindor says:
aw no, poor jamie!! his beloved lily comes to visit him and then calls him by a tender nickname that causes him to become delerius with pain! :(

lol! another great chapter! and continues the story nicely from part one. i like how it has a lighter feel to it in places, like with sirius and lily planning to surprise james. i also think its briliant that you included the whole lily/snape scenario really naturally, giving it great depth yet fitting it with the story! i always do feel sorry for severus every time i read something related to his relationship with lily...

i feel all the characters seem to grow up remarkably in this, and act very maturely. this is great as a lot of the time they are way too care-free. you had the emotions coming out wonderfully, i could really feel for each of the characters.

So, reading on now! fantastic job as always!

Rose :)

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