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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Another great chapter, but I never really expected anything less from you, anyway... ;) I very much enjoyed both Rolf and Luna's thoughts about the preceding night --- I really like how you dedicate equal amount of time to both of them, not only Luna.

"She was the unknown quantity that threatened to blot out the entire mathematical equation in which his life had transformed." --- Oh, boy, the poor man is completley and desperately in love... There's no help for him now... Wonderfully said, though! I love the words you use!! Your vocabulary in general is amazing!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!

I'm glad I've managed to live up to expectations so far. Indeed, I'm looking for some balance in what concerns Luna and Rolf. They are both the main characters of this story and I want them both to get equal space in the chapters.

Oh yes he's completely smitten with her but he fails to see that for now. He just thinks of himself as pleasantly infatuated and nothing more, nothing less. Thank you so much for the vocabulary bit:D I'm always excited to see people praising that aspect because I'm not a native speaker and sometimes I fail to express in English what I really want. But most of my thoughts are there and in the exact form that I wanted them to be expressed.

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