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Review:BarbaraPotty says:
Hey, I wanted to see the talk! Between Severus and Harry, I mean...that could be really interesting...damn, couldn't you write it as a one-shot or something like that? :))

Anyway, wonderful chapter again, only maybe the last paragraph is a bit...unnatural, it just isn't...fluent, if you know what I mean. Bu the rest is pretty wonderful.

Author's Response: I know, I know... sorry but it just wasn't coming out for me... I'm having flow issues at the moment with this story... you can probably tell though..

I'll find a way to work some of the conversation in... I'm not promising anything though...:(

Thanks for reading and sticking with this story.

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