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Review:Ollie Vander says:
Hmmm, great 3rd chapter! I am really enjoying the creativity and originality of this story. The only part that confused me was when Ginny bumped into the man. I had no idea he was on a cell phone, untill I went back and re-read the paragraph. It was just a little too much to take in at once, because at that point, we know something exeptional is about to happen, and our minds are going, "oh, let me just get to the exciting part," and our eyes, (especially mine-I have astigmatism) tend to jump around.

Other than that, really good chapter,I cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Yeah, I understand. Sometimes when I'm excited while reading a story, i, too, don't pick up all the hints and then have to go and reread. But I will go and check if it's written clearly enough, so thanks for pointing it out. :)

I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for your awesome review as always. :)

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