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Review:Ariana_Gryffindor says:
Hi i'm back lol

Okay this was another good chapter. it was a nice touch with Albus and James very sweet and fatherly. The bit where Ginny played the trick was really well done i actually believed it until it was explained.
I also like the confusion between them and the introduction of Luna and Rolf.
By the way this may be because i am from Australia or becuase i just don't know: what is tabbouleh? i'd really like to know. =)

Once again good spelling and grammar.
A nice story

Hope i helped in some small way.
Steph

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the bit between Harry and Ginny and the kids. For some reason, I always picture H/G pranking each other very slightly. I'm absolutely sure that he loves her very much (even though I'm primarily a H/L shipper).

I wanted to play up the confusion over the extra invitees even more, but I decided that it would get tedious. Thanks for letting me know that I got it just about right.

Re-reading it myself, I just spotted a continuity error that I will have to fix.

Thanks again for the grammar and spelling check.

Tabbouleh is a salad made with bulgur wheat, tomatoes, green onions and parsley, with a light, citrusy/garlicky dressing. It is Middle Eastern in origin, hence the hummus and pita chips as well. One of the nice things about being able to Apparate is that your take-out is always nice and fresh and you can pick up dinner in London, even when you live in the Hebrides :)

Thanks again for your kind words.

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