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Review:Ariana_Gryffindor says:
Hi this i ariana from the forums.

So to begin with i want to say you have an interesting pairing Lavander/Dudley. It should make an interesting story.
You have done well with your grammar and spelling as i spotted near to no mistakes, just a few places where a semicoln could have been used instead of commas but thats nothing major at all.

OKay to begin with i love how you have reintroduced Lavender, the first Won-won as a way of letting her identity be known was clever and the cripple bit is god twist. Makes you wonder how she actually lost her legs? Although It should add some complications and triumphs to the storyline which is good.

So i wonder how they got together and how long they have known each other to be getting married?
Better continue reading then

Steph @0o0@

Author's Response: I promise that all of the questions that you brought up will be answered. I will tell how she lost her legs, met Dudley, what she's been doing for ten years in hiding, and how long they've known each other.

Thanks also for the validation on spelling and grammar. I pride myself on my spelling, and I hate typos with a passion, so I edit heavily. Alas, some grammar mistakes will escape me as I have never been trained at writing.

Thanks for letting me know that this is a readable idea.

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