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Review:Leo072491 says:
I can honestly say, I think that broke my heart. It was beautifully written. Terribly romantic and the ending was so tragic it made me want to go out and strangle Draco. I mean Azkaban is too good for him!!! Anyway it was a really beautiful story and I didn't honestly find any problems with the grammer or the plot, especially since this is based off a challenge.
The only thing I would possibly change or add on is I wish I knew what Harry Ron and Hermione's reactions were. I mean did they approve of the relationship? Of Scorpius? And how did they react after Rose was brutally murdered. I mean that is what I really wanted to see. I wanted to see how they felt about everything. Even if you don't add it on a sequel would be awsome.
Anyway I loved the story. It was a pleasure reading it and I am so happy you came to my review thread and asked me to, otherwise I may have never found it! Feel free to come back to my thread if you want more things reviewed!

~Leo

Author's Response: ah their reactions. i've been thinking about this for a while. i didnt know whether to add their reactions in or not, and quite honestly, i didnt know how to approach it. i think when ive built up my courage, ill weave that into the story. thanks so much for reviewing :)

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