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Review:Leo072491 says:
Well I was having a look at your Author's Note when I was finished. First of all I want to commend you for taking your life experinces and being open enough to put them down on paper (or I guess Word Document) for the world to see. And no matter what I or anyone else tell you don't let it take away from this emotional piece you've created.
Secondly emotion seems to be something you have down pact. Which is clearly a key component for this story. However there were some some character actions that were a bit confusing. Though I feel that Harry's reaction was fairly accurate as well as Ginny's the reaction of their kids seemed a bit off.
I know I myself have had many faimly memebers die from cancer and I do know even at eight years old I knew it was a realtively fatal disease. I think that if their father was dying of cancer or even in the hospital they would have been a bit more subdued, especially Albus. That was really the only thing I noticed, everything else seemed realtively in place.
Once again amazing job and congradulations.

~Leo

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