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Review:Browneyes101 says:
Here I am as you requested. :)

This one-shot was well written, and I really enjoyed the plot. This was a prefect song for this one-shot; I'm not real big on song fics, but I think you got me interested. The flow was also well done, nothing happened too fast or went too slow, which is really good saying as that's what most people have a problem with; including me.

Here comes the bad news. I think you put too much description. You need description, yes, but too much could ruin a story or one-shot; let people form there own images and use there own imaginations. That's what most people are here for.

Hope I helped.8/10


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