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Review:LaurenT says:
Sorry that my first feedback has to be negative

the line- "I’m happy with one dead friend,"
it sorta doesn't work... I know what you mean but it comes out the wrong way... it should be something more like "I have one dead friend already, i dont want anymore"

just coz its out of place with his apparent sadness

I haven't read enough to get an opinion of the story, so i'll check in with you later, probably at the end

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for the pointer ^_^ Constructive criticism is what am looking for and am glad you could help!! I'm getting the chapters edited...and soon, I'm sure all my chapters will be as vibrant as I want them to be!

Thank you :)

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