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Review:Sal1705 says:
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Sirius gasped in horror, “Merlin!” He turned to James, “we have to do something and fast, that could actually happen, he eats everything!”

James sniggered, “what were you doing right before it happened?” He scowled his eyes narrowing, “Evans, what are you doing?”

~~~

Remus stared stupidly at him. “How does that help me?”

Sirius shrugged, “it doesn’t right now, but it could in the future,”

“Then what was the bloody point in telling the story now?” Remus demanded frustrated.

Sirius glanced from Remus to James, “pure entertainment?”

“I’m going to kill you,” Remus said irritably.

~~~

Peter however didn’t think Lily should get to attend to Remus and pushed her in the back of her knees causing her knees to give way and she slumped to the floor. “Moony, I’ll look after you, I’ll give you the kiss of life,” he assured Remus.

“Padfoot! Prongs! Help me!” Remus cried out.

James grabbed Peter by the arms hauling him to his feet and ended up with Peter’s elbow in his nose. “Ow!” James’ hands flew to his stinging nose to check for blood.

Sirius dived forward and managed to grab Peter, pinning his arms to his side. “Run Moony! Run for your life!” He cried dramatically.

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I loved the whole chapter, it was great.
10/10
~Sal1705

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! thanks for taking the time to let me know which bits you liked best!

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