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Review:LaurenT says:
Hi, I'm the sort of person that prefers to review right at the end of the story, when I have had the chance to read everything there is.
Firstly, Tom Riddle was 16 in the diary preserved form.

Can I just say that I really like this story. You have the right amount of believeable character interactions coupled with that softer Malfoy that so many others have butchered.

There are very few (if any) grammar and spelling mistakes, which I thank you for, because a story with spelling and grammar problems is very difficult to get in to.

I like your original ideas for having harry, ron and hermione go back to Hougwarts... I would happily read this story as the actual 7th Harry Potter book.

I am a very big Draco/Hermione fan, and I especially like that you haven't gone totally cliche with the relationship between them because often that is all too unrealistic.

I enjoy the storyline, it is very interesting, with plenty of twists and turns to keep us all wanting more. I especially liked the idea of tying Draco to the Order with the unbreakable vow, I haven't seen that before.

This is the first HPFF that i've read in a good year and a half, so thanks for making it an enjoyable read =)

Finally, better keep posting more chapters coz I'm dying to know what happens next!!

Author's Response: Wow. What an amazing review.

Okay. So I messed up Riddle's age in that chapter, I think I was ten years off. I have to remember to fix that sometime. Thank you, though.

I love that you think the characters and their actions are believable. That's really reassuring.

And yes, I know what you mean about spelling and grammar. I know that that is usually someone's first impression of a story, and I had to have mistakes. So that's good.

Originality is pretty important to me. It's sometimes hard to find the line between inspiration and plaigarism (spelled that wrong, probably). I just have to say that _Kreacher_ gave me the idea of giving Hermione an alias and disguise. So thank you, _Kreacher_! But other than that idea, I make everything my own. :)

What I find interesting is that people actually enjoy reading the random stuff that I pull out of my mind. It all really depends on the time of day and stray thoughts that are floating around in there at certain times. I swear, this story would be totally different if I wrote certain chapters on different days. I think I'm probably confusing you.... Anyway, I think that the Unbreakable Vow made Draco's joining the Order way more believable. It was only practical that McGonagall do that after he knew so much. Like I said, though, I can't believe any of this story fits together because most of it is total randomness.

Again, thanks for the great review! Reviews like these really boost my confidence. :)



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